Dark Poetry, Distant Memories of another

Topic: Dark Poetry, Distant Memories of another life and all the wicked things in between

Posted : 07/12/05 / Views : 3146 / Replies :


User	anon

Hi all, *grins*

Thought I would start up a post for the gothic poets. I currently write for another forum (damn i cant remember the link, way too much absynth now!!!)

I thought that as im new to the site ill drop a post and see how it goes. Id like to start the ball rolling and post out one of my poems, thoughts and comments are always welcome.

Corridors;

The hallways are dripping with blood, the hallow screams resound within
Doors are barred, locking back the madness, never seen.
No windows to show the world, no light to clear the ever darkness
That hides everything and I feel so heartless

The walls are twisted by my hate, my bodies racked and I'm in a state.
I cry as I scream for help, rocking forward as the walls start to melt.
The hallways begin to scream in pain, almost calling within my brain.
I try to block out the deep felt shame to try and stem my raging pain.

Falling down on my knees knowing I have lost the will to be
Careless anger flowing free, this can not be all that's left for me.

I walk the corridors of my mind, leaving my anger all behind, I feel the walls closing
Deep within my mind, brining a sad ending to my hallowed rhyme

Bitter;

I stand here and listen to the words you say
Wishing my hate inside would simply fall away
I watch you smile as you take delight
I feel the pain and as I try to fight

I'm bitter, am I so shallow.
I'm bitter, look at my face as your fists fall
I'm bitter, I @#%$ hate you all.

I lay as a bloody mess on the floor
I know you're standing there behind my door
I cry inside from every ounce of pain
I watch as my blood drains away

I'm bitter, am I so shallow.
I'm bitter, look at my face as your fists fall
I'm bitter, can't go on living like this.

I fear you when you come near
wishing all of this would disappear
I try to run away, break for freedom
But I awake along and cold in my bedroom

I'm bitter, am I so shallow.
I'm bitter, look at my face as your fists fall
I'm bitter, tonight I am going to end it all

I'm bitter!

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Reply #1: Re: Dark Poetry, Distant Memories of another life and all the wicked things in between

Posted : 28/04/05


anonymous

I really liked your poem... would you care to read mine and see what you think? i wrote this in a boring klass... a bit half minded.. so its not very good... but hay... its there... :

Her eyes are cold
Dead with fright
As her skin slowly burns
In the morning light
Runs trough the trees
Tries to escape
The light cashes in
She is slowly raped

She isn't normal
So they are scared
Hunt her down
Kill the one who dared
Dared to love her
Or even come near
They don't understand her
They only fear

No place for mercy
The church is her dread
She cry's for help
Calls for the dead
Her love is the night
There she can hide
When she slowly embraces
Her evil side

The mirror in the lake
Made by her tears
She cried for people
Over the years
Now she is dead
They still hate
For nobody can love her
That is her fate

Summer is her end
She creeps into her shell
The life's that she lives
Reminds her of hell
Sees a black creature
Slowly depart
Leaving her dying
With a stake in her heart…

Reply #2: Re: Dark Poetry, Distant Memories of another life and all the wicked things in between

Posted : 29/04/05


anonymous

Wow, all i can say is "Wow!!!!"

Very good, I liked it alot. Good use of imagery, flowed pretty well, was very easy to follow and understand what you felt.

I will posting some more of mine shortly ;) But keep up the good work

Reply #3: Re: Dark Poetry, Distant Memories of another life and all the wicked things in between

Posted : 29/04/05


anonymous

Heres some more for you to view and comment on folks :)

Have fun.

You are my reason:

Before man and before time have I searched for a reason to live
Before you there was nothing left for me to give
I thought that I would never find someone like you.

I used to walk alone, watching as time flew past
I sat and wondered as lovers hearts passed on by
I learnt at a young age that to be alone is the hardest thing.

You came to me like an angel fallen from some highest realm
you took my hand showed me love, gave me a reason to exist again
you pumped life in to me. Showed me what it is to feel alive

now I sit and smile holding you close to my once cold heart.
Bitter sweet tears stream down my face. My joy is overwhelming
I can not offer you anything more than my soul, passion, honour
and love.
You have become my reason for living.

Evermore:

As we walk through the endless night, holding hands we both understand what the feelings inside us mean.
Sharing these moments together is a blessing indeed, looking to our future we made our plans on both our dreams.

Sitting under the pale moonlight, sat upon this cliffs edge, we entwine like the never ending night, passions play to steal us away from the cold reality in which we live.
Lying down with you next to me as our hearts beat in endless rhythm, I look above me to the stars and I wish this would last forever.

I close my eyes to dream of you for ever more; I feel your caress upon my skin, motioning me to step inside our lovers dream.
Inside my mind I play out my part with endless love for you. Inside you're mind you dream of us and the hope for an endless love.

I awake to watch you dream with a smile upon your face. I know it's of me you dream; I know you'll awake with a smile to show you love me.
The daylight shines through the trees as your eyes open slowly; your dreams were sweet as you rise to kiss me.

I know for this moment in time I would die a happy man, just to have you by my side for evermore.

Carry me home:

Distant now are my memories of the love we once shared. Strange how it all went wrong, I never saw the signs?
Why this has happened to me, why must I remember you this way, distant now are the feelings that I once had?

I remember you in my head, your love kept me alive, but without you by my side, I fear I am all but dead
Staring back at the photo of you brings back the memories. You were taken from me, you where all I ever had.

I never thought that I could be so alone, so far away from you.

It hurts so very much to know you're in the arms of another man, but I know I will be stronger than I ever thought.
I just hope than you hear my words and understand that I still care for you.

Falling so far, the suffering is killing me inside
I can't go on, knowing you are not gonna be by my side.
I fear the darkness when I walk alone.
I wish to hear your voice as it carries me home.

Although my life is broken, I can still remember just the way you taste. Everyone I see reminds me of you, your eyes haunt me still.

Why did we end up fighting like we did, why did it all end in tears? What did I do to push you away again.
I walk past the places we use to go, I cant take the pain inside of me now, it grows as I remember the love we had.

You have infected my life, but I will never find the cure, I don't want to lose you but I know I have no choice.

Falling so far, the pain is too much to bear
I can't go on, knowing that I will be alone for ever more.
I fear the darkness when I walk alone
I need to hear your voice as you carry me home.

Reply #4: Re: Dark Poetry, Distant Memories of another life and all the wicked things in between

Posted : 30/04/05



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Very good, both of you. If there's one thing this site provokes it's dark verse.

Reply #5: Re: Dark Poetry, Distant Memories of another life and all the wicked things in between

Posted : 12/05/05


anonymous

yer but not much eles lol :/

Reply #6: Re: Dark Poetry, Distant Memories of another life and all the wicked things in between

Posted : 13/05/05


anonymous

Hunger
Drink the sacred blood until it dribbles down your chin,
Make the last highlight of every wanton sin.
Divulge the secrets that never passed your lips,
Explore the open wounds with sharpened finger tips.

Enchant the weak and injured until they fear no more,
Drown there sense of purpose hide them under the door.
Why have you forsaken all the voices in your head?
Do you realize that all you've ever loved is going to be dead?

Pick up the shards of realization and putt them in your eyes.
Throw down the gauntlet to all your inconsequential truths and lies.
Press the luscious pillow to the faces of the young,
Hope that they will never become the monster thats began.

Reply #7: Re: Dark Poetry, Distant Memories of another life and all the wicked things in between

Posted : 26/05/05


anonymous

Here is another poem for you? What do you think.. honesty never hurt anyone.. ;)

She who is always happy
Is wearing a frown
Her fabulus wonderful life
Twisted upside down
She only loved life
It only tore her apart
Hurt so many times
It hurts in her heart
The girl who is always smiling
Is lying broken on the floor
Nobody hears her crying
Locked behind the door
All her confidence gone
Her gentel soul shattered
The only things she ever lost
Were all the things that mattered
Sitting there on the floor
Running mascara eyes
She is all alone now
And has nowhere to hide
Wishing someone was here
Here to hold her tight
But she just sits up alone
Through out the lonly night
The people that once loved her
They are not here now
Leaving her wondering
Why did she lose them? And how?
She doesn't want to be no more
As she holds her knife
She steps into freedom
By taking her own life...

Reply #8: Re: Dark Poetry, Distant Memories of another life and all the wicked things in between

Posted : 26/05/05


anonymous

Bravo, Very well done. Im impressed. (ok the spelling needs checking ;) ) but I liked it alot, good use of expression, easy to understand and follow, flowed simply yet smoothly.

I will say this you have a talent young lady, keep it up. :)

Reply #9: Re: Dark Poetry, Distant Memories of another life and all the wicked things in between

Posted : 26/05/05


anonymous

Thank you very much... my poems mean everything to me.. :)

Reply #10: Re: Dark Poetry, Distant Memories of another life and all the wicked things in between

Posted : 27/05/05


anonymous

i see no-one likes my poem :(

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